We happened upon a poem which was inspired through one of Australia's famous bush poets "Banjo Paterson" who wrote "The Man From Snowy River" a classic poem full of thrill, surprise and the hard-working man. Of course we added a short description of this classic tale excluding the poem itself knowing that first it was quite a long poem and second the chosen words would be challenging to a year 4 child. We also noted that the area he was from was indeed our town and area and where we lived was also connected to and named after places and words right out of the poem itself.
So through my own thoughts and feelings inspired me to write these poems which have come directly from my core of who I was being at the time.
"Blind Faith" by Faenza Aitken
My Blind Faith I asked myself to which extent do I have
Says universe to me to all extent you prosper.. don’t worry your very soul
To change and move ahead says they we know and believe in you
Erase the past and seek us fast your there yet did not know
We welcome all your queries and oppose your comment last
You are in light and speeding through quicker.. you last the task
To know you are exceeding the road we can now show
For in the place there are no words, no shadows and over-throw
So keep it light full of surprise and save your very soul
From complicated drama-based in fear that will not grow
"ODE TO MONEY" by Faenza Aitken
Money is my friend money is all around
It comes in any currency.. US dollar note or pound
It keeps you in good company and yields you shares and stocks
For me it brings great pleasure with thoughts of riches and diamond
rocks
I see it now everywhere and dream it right out loud
I see it in my slumber time all dripping golden sublime
Of course it sees me too I know its waiting shimmering and proud
So come my friends you modest lot I’ve plans for you ahead
Come forward take your place as you are with me
joyous to the end
2 comments:
The poems you wrote are quite empowering stuff, the more time I read them the greater the understanding. I believe you have a true gift to make a collection of words come to life. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Hi Faenza, I love your poems. Thanks for sharing them here!
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